Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Part 1: A World

Part 1: A World
This poem is only about one third finished, but I wanted to share what I produced yesterday. I need to suffer horrible depression to put me in the frame of mind to produce good poetry. I'm leaving it as a statement until it is completed.

Part 1: A World

A world is not in human hands
But in the grip of greed
Whose champions make cruel demands
Upon the ones in need
Thus honest work is undermined
Turned crooked and uncouth
To capture and in darkness blind
All seekers of the truth

And nowhere is the truth mocked more
Than where the people claim
That truth and justice are their core
And happiness their aim
For bitter knowledge fails to sell
Unless made sweet with lies
And long experience would tell
Of virtue's slow demise

To make the truth, they form a club
Against persistent doubt
Endeavouring to poets snub
And keep the riffraff out
And if the masses wish to back
Another's voice instead
The club falls on him like a pack
And seize his words to shred

In such a world did Raymond write
As but the bravest dared
Directly in the teeth of spite
Unflinchingly, he stared
Producing from his noble views
The nectar of his sight
Determined by the words he used
To put corruption right

Though countless praises for his bids
From sharing had been won
He stood alone within the midst
Of followers not one
The evil club would then descend
Upon his humble home
And scatter wide among its friend
The beauty of his tome

When Raymond saw how were adored
Pretenders in his place
While he stayed callously ignored
His grief he could not face
Depleted of his finest gems
Bereft of slightest hope
As time provided no amends
He gave his neck the rope

Part 2: A Netherworld (to be continued)

Not bad, eh? Same mournful meter as The Mortal Interval (Poems Index). A lot of artists like Raymond conclude that life is not worth living in a world without truth. In spite of my experience, however, I remain optimistic about this world. I know that some powerful people have already been punished on my behalf and this gives me hope about my future. If I were to 'give my neck the rope', it would only to be to draw the real experience to complete this poem, rather than having to rely solely on my imagination. I'd also be interested in meeting many of the great artists and poets who ended their lives in suicide. They tend to be outstanding.
  
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